Like you said, you didn't change much but I feel like the text flows better. And I am sure my native English speaking customers have even better feeling
Sorry if it took me long to reply to thank you. I have been using the corrected copy you helped me with and my tests show that it pulls in twice as much as my previous sales copy. What you charge is very fair and I make it back multiplied with more sales. Thanks again and I will be sending you lots of text in the new year.